Reflection
I only received one feedback on my last pitch and it was positive, so I did not do any changes to the content.
What did you change, based on the feedback?
This time around I dress up in a business suit , making my pitch look more professional. The reason I did this change was base on my reading reflection, Scott Adams said that always dressing properly makes a big impact. He told a story of how he decided to dress in a suit on his flight to California, and meet a CEO in the plane.
Hey Herzen, great pitch! I really like how you tied in your reading reflection to the changes that you made. Dressing properly and professionally definitely provides a lot more credibility, especially when you never know who you could run in to! One suggestion I would have is to just be more dynamic instead of standing still to emphasize your passion for the product that you’re selling.
ReplyDeleteHey Herzen,
ReplyDeleteYou have definitely improved since your first elevator pitch. Your professional attire, good cadence of speech and concise points made this your best pitch to date. You seem much more comfortable speaking on camera and seem to believe in what you are saying. I do agree with Taylor that you should be just a bit more dynamic in your pitch with movement, but overall it is really good.