A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch.
What stood out the most is that my idea connected with some of my classmates. Overall the feedback I receive was positive, but I did get some pointers on how to make my elevator pitch better.
What did you change, based on the feedback?
This time I tried to be more dynamic and stood up to do my pitch, I also dressed different so I could make a better impact.
Hey Herzen! This was a good pitch with all relevant information. I liked the addition of the stethoscope since it ties into your business concept, and I also liked the statistic you used when opening your pitch. Similar to your changes, I also stood up and was more dynamic for this pitch, and even dressed differently too to better fit my customer base! Good job!
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